Commercial Treatment — Draft V2

WORLD
CUP
SUMMER

The world's football community is descending on New York City.

This isn't a commercial about the World Cup. It's a commercial about the city — three women already living it, already moving through it, already part of it — showing everyone else how to get involved without a $500 ticket.

FTBL LOCAL is the plug. This is how we tell that story.

:60Cut Duration
3Principal Cast
1 DayShoot
NYCLocation
VéritéStyle

Director's Vision

01
The Idea

Three women. Three routes through New York City. One destination.

The World Cup is the backdrop — not the hero. The city is the hero. We shoot this clean and controlled — steadicam throughout, each woman speaking directly to camera. The environment is real. The camera is steady.

Each woman is already doing what FTBL LOCAL is about. Samantha just ran a pick-up game. Ruby is on the subway checking her phone, staring down the reality of $500 tickets. Shyla is emerging into daylight, scarf on, locked in. They're not performing for the camera — they're just going somewhere.

The Visual Language

We're inspired by the energy of 90s NYC football culture — the informal, found-space quality of it. Think pitch-side documentation, not advertising.

Steadicam on all three characters — fluid, controlled, purposeful. Each woman speaks directly to lens. The camera doesn't chase them, it travels with them.

Natural light throughout. The subway's tungsten warmth on Ruby is a feature, not a problem to correct. Everything at eye level or below.

The final arrival shot is the only moment we break from movement. Hold it. Let it breathe.

Real

Authentic environments, real NYC texture. No fake crowd scenes.

Fast

The edit accelerates. By :31 we're cutting every 2 seconds.

City

NYC is a character. Every frame should feel like nowhere else.

Warm

Friends going somewhere together. Joyful, not hype-y.

Mood & Tone

02
Visual Feel

Steadicam, clean and warm. Slightly warm grade. Real skin tones, real locations. Polished but not precious — the environment provides the texture.

Clean wide lens Warm grade Direct to camera
Energy

Purposeful but not frantic. These aren't hype girls — they're people who know something you don't yet. Confident, inclusive, a little mischievous.

Nike "Find Your Greatness" Adidas city spots
Edit Rhythm

Slow open, building pace. The first three scenes breathe. Then from :31 onward we cut hard and fast, landing on the CTA with authority.

Montage driven Music-locked cuts No jump cuts

Cast

03
01
Samantha
Pitch → Street

Just wrapped a pick-up game somewhere in the city. She's still in kit — cleats on pavement, ball under her arm. This is her element. She's talking to camera mid-stride, totally comfortable, like she's been in front of a lens her whole life.

Player Natural on cam Athletic Warm energy
02
Ruby
Subway Car

On the MTA, scrolling ticket prices. The tungsten warmth of the car is her whole aesthetic. She's the reality check — the one who says what everyone's thinking. Eyes on phone for the first beat of her line, then straight up to camera.

Deadpan delivery Relatable City kid Dry humour
03
Shyla
Subway Exit → Street

Match-day scarf, coming up out of the ground into daylight. The pivot character — she takes Ruby's reality check and flips it into action. Energetic but not over the top. The kind of person who makes you feel like you're already late to something good.

High energy Decisive Fan culture Strong presence
Note

All three cast as real NYC football community members where possible — not actors playing the part. Authentic connection to the game will read on camera. Ages 20s–30s, any background. Chemistry between the three on the final arrival shot is critical — ideally they know each other or we build in rehearsal time.

Shot List

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#CharacterDescriptionLocationType
01SAMWide — Samantha walking away from a pitch, ball under arm, cleats in hand or on feet.Pier 5 / McCarren ParkWide EST
02RUBYWide — Ruby seated on subway, commuters around her. Environmental establish.A/C/E or L train carWide EST
03SHYLAWide — Shyla walking street-level, scarf visible, pace purposeful.Williamsburg / BrooklynWide EST
04SAMMedium — Samantha to camera mid-stride, steadicam. Cleats clicking on pavement audible. Delivers line 1.Sidewalk near pitchMED OTS
05SAMInsert — Cleats on pavement, low angle. Pure texture shot. Optional B-roll.SidewalkINSERT
06RUBYMedium — Ruby on subway, phone in hand. Warm tungsten light. Eyes on phone first beat, then up to cam.Subway car interiorMED DIRECT
07RUBYInsert — Phone screen showing ticket listing / eye-watering price. Quick cut in edit.Subway carINSERT
08SHYLAMedium — Shyla emerges from subway stairs into daylight, steadicam. Delivers line 3 as she hits the street.Subway exit — Bedford Ave or similarMED STEADICAM
09SAMMedium — faster pace now, Samantha delivering activations/events line. Intercutting begins.StreetMED STEADICAM
10RUBYMedium — Ruby now off subway / walking, delivers supporter groups / bars / fields line.Street near stationMED STEADICAM
11SHYLAClose — "And we don't want you to miss out." Pause lands here.StreetCU DIRECT
12SAMMedium — "FTBL Local is going to be your local soccer plug." Spots destination ahead.Final approach streetMED DIRECT
13RUBYMedium — "Find out what's going on and how to get involved."Final approach streetMED DIRECT
14SHYLAWide → Medium — All three arrive. Three-way greeting, energy, laughter. Shyla turns back: "FTBLLocal.com."Destination — bar / pitch / rooftopWIDE → MED
15Title card — FTBL LOCAL logo lockup. Hold 3–4 seconds. FTBLLocal.com lower third.Post / GraphicsTITLE CARD

Music & Sound

05
Music Brief

Tempo: Starts understated — something that feels like a city waking up. Builds steadily through the intercutting section. By :44 it should be driving hard enough to carry the CTA without feeling like a sports ad.

Genre direction: Afrobeats-adjacent, UK garage, or neo-soul with forward momentum. Something that reads as global but sounds distinctly like New York right now. No EDM builds. No trap hi-hats.

Lyrics: Preferably instrumental or minimal vocals during dialogue sections. A lyric-heavy drop can land on the arrival at :54.

Sound Design

Sound design is as important as the music track. The ambient layer tells the story of where each character is.

Samantha: Cleats on concrete, distant shouts from the pitch, a ball bouncing.

Ruby: Subway rumble, MTA announcement in the distance, the scrape of someone's bag.

Shyla: The city opening up — traffic, wind, the hiss of a bus door.

These ambiences blend under the music. The mix should feel layered and alive.

Script

06
Full :60 Version 2
Open0:00–0:08

Quick-cut triptych: Samantha leaving a pitch in cleats, ball under arm. Ruby seated on the subway, earbuds in. Shyla walking with a match-day scarf. No dialogue — music and ambient sound only.

Samantha0:08–0:17

Steadicam, natural light. Still in full kit — cleats on pavement, ball under arm. Walking to camera, direct address.

Samantha
This summer, the world's football community is coming to our city — to celebrate the beautiful game.
Ruby0:17–0:24

Subway car interior — warm tungsten light, commuters in background. Scrolling phone. Insert: ticket price screen. Looks up with "you see this?" energy.

Ruby
But ticket prices to go to a game? Honestly — they're crazy right now.
Eyes on phone for first beat, then up to camera.
Shyla0:24–0:31

Emerges from subway staircase into daylight — visual handoff from Ruby underground. Energetic, decisive.

Shyla
But that shouldn't be a reason why you're not part of it. There's way too much going on to sit this one out.
All Three0:31–0:44

Pace increases. Fast cuts. Ruby now off subway and walking.

Samantha
There are going to be activations, events, watch parties happening all over the city.
Ruby
Supporter groups, the best bars showing the games, fields to play on.
Shyla
And we don't want you to miss out.
Pause before the pivot — let it land.
The Plug0:44–0:54

Close to the destination. Purposeful pace.

Samantha
FTBL Local is going to be your local soccer plug.
Ruby
Find out what's going on and how to get involved.
Close0:54–1:00

All three arrive. Three-way greeting, energy, laughter. Hold on this. Title card.

Shyla
FTBLLocal.com — that's the place to go.
Optional: spoken over title card.
FTBLLocal.com
Title card — 3–4 sec hold with FTBL LOCAL logo lockup
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